The rickety old bus

by Daphne on June 10, 2010

in picture perfect, short stories

There once was a rickety old bus that nobody wanted anymore. Its paint was chipping. The seats that used to smell of fresh leather were now torn and tattered. The windows were long gone. The doors struggled each time it tried to open and shut.  It wheezed and sighed and creaked.

When the new buses came along, nobody cared much for this little old bus and it was soon forgotten.

Everyday, the conductor stood at the door as the rickety old bus rolled around town looking for passengers but none came.

bus 10 The rickety old bus

It’s time to hit the scraps, you’re too old and slow.” some called out. “Nobody wants to sit on a creaky old bus like you,” shouted another.

The conductor didn’t listen. “You’re special and one day, someone will see that,” he told the bus. So off they went on their merry way, happy to feel the gentle breeze that blew through the open windows. “We’re not too old to have new adventures,” they said.

One day, a little boy saw the rickety old bus as it pulled up beside him. He stopped and looked at it. He saw the chipped paint and the empty windows but it was the passenger right at the back that caught his eye.

bus 1 The rickety old bus

The boy thought for a moment, then he got up, walked all the way to the back and sat down with a smile. “The bus sure looks like it could use a facelift,” he thought, “but the girl at the back, she’s the most beautiful girl I’ve ever seen.”

bus 3 The rickety old bus

Sitting there at the back, the boy was happier than he had ever been before. “I’m never getting off this bus,” he said to himself. He stole glances at the girl next to him, not sure if she could hear the thump of his heart, or if she was just playing it cool.

bus 8 The rickety old bus

She’s totally playing it cool,” he convinced himself.

bus 7 The rickety old bus

All day, the bus drove around town and passengers came up and left. But neither the boy or his girl moved an inch. It was the bestest day of their lives.

bus 6 The rickety old bus

When they were done driving, the conductor told them stories about all the adventures the rickety old bus had been on years and years ago, when it was not so old or rickety.

bus 9 The rickety old bus

I’m glad you didn’t stop being a bus,” the boy said. “Because to me, you’re the most awesome bus in the whole wide world.

And the bus just smiled.

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San

Sweeeeeeet!!! I like!
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Daphne

@San, thanks!

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Jus

That’s such a sweet story! :) And where’s this bus btw? The museum? And Tru looks so cute sitting next to the little girl! ;)
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Daphne

@Jus, it’s actually at East Coast Park right outside the McDonald’s. There’s this little tentage at the corner with a carousel and some ancient-looking kiddy rides. The bus was one of them!

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Lazymummy

Good story *clapping*

Ps. Tru’s expression is priceless. ;)

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Daphne

@Lazymummy, thanks! Hahah yes I like his look of enthusiasm in that last shot.

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Janice

Nice words to those pictures. My boys took pic with those buses before too. :)

Thanks for visiting my blog *hug*
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Daphne

@Janice, Thanks for hopping over Janice, yes I think they’ve been there since like, I was was a little kid myself!

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Violet

Hi Daphne,

Great post! Very creative :) You are great at capturing expressions! I have 2 kiddos as well. Not easy to take photos of kids. :) Keep the heartwarming posts coming!

Sincerely,
Violet
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Daphne

@Violet, Woot, what an honour! Hello Violet, thanks for visiting.

Everyone, this is Violet Lim, co-founder of Lunch Actually, and one of the finalists in the most Insightful Blog Category as well. A successful business woman, a mommy of two and still only in her twenties – she’s the classic Stepford Mom, Singaporean version!

She has genuinely insightful stuff aplenty on the whole works regarding dating and relationships at http://www.violetlim.com. Go, go, check it out.

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Violet

@Daphne, Thanks Daphne for the plug! :) Will definitely be coming back again for more cute photos and insights! :)

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Jane

Great pics and wonderful story =)
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Daphne

@Jane, Thanks Jane!

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kei

Hi Daphne,

Thanks again for visiting my blog. I’ve been reading your blog since the visit. And I love it! Been looking at previous entries because I can’t get enough of it. Ha.

Your kids are so adorable! Tru has a ‘gong gong’ charm about him (hope you don’t take offence. I truly think his ‘gong’ look is very charming!) and Kirsten is real pretty. :)

Do you mind if I include your blog in my blogroll?
kei´s last post ..Little miss observant

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Daphne

@kei, Wow, thanks! Of course no offense taken, I still find his trademark *dazed* look very hilarious and I’m his mother.

Also, i had no idea you needed to ask permission to add people to the blogroll, I’ve already added yours since I chanced upon your blog! So please feel free to add me..
=).

Thanks again Kei!

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ashlyn

Hi, can i check where’s this place?

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Daphne

Its right outside McDonald’s at East Coast Park :)

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